Question

8．如今，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)在我們的生活中起著越來(lái)越重要的作用，人們的工作和學(xué)習(xí)幾乎離不開(kāi)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)．有了互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，人們的生活變得更加豐富多彩．請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以O(shè)n the Internet 為題，寫一篇介紹互聯(lián)網(wǎng)用途的文章．
要求：1.80詞左右．
2．包含信息、通訊、學(xué)習(xí)、娛樂(lè)、生活等方面．適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3．當(dāng)然，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)也存在弊端，寫出其不足，至少兩點(diǎn)．

On the Internet
Nowadays，Internet plays an important role in our lives．On the Internet，we
can read news and learn about information．We can also send emails，take classes，read books and learn foreign languages，enjoy music，play games and so on．We can even do shopping and make friends on it．
But every coin has two sides．Internet also has several disadvantages．Children
spend so much time on online games that they may find they have less interest in the study．It's also bad for their eyes and health．
Let's use the Internet properly and it will make our life richer and more
colorful．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Children spend so much time on online games that they may find they have less interest in the study孩子們花了太多的時(shí)間在網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲上以至于他們發(fā)現(xiàn)對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)的興趣更少了．
so…that從句：如此…以至于
【高分句型二】
It's also bad for their eyes and health對(duì)他們的眼睛和健康也有害．
be bad for：對(duì)…有害

解答 On the Internet
Nowadays，Internet plays an important role in our lives．On the Internet，we can read news and learn about information．We can also send emails，take classes，read books and learn foreign languages，enjoy music，play games and so on．We can even do shopping and make friends on it．（優(yōu)點(diǎn)）
But every coin has two sides．Internet also has several disadvantages．Children spend so much time on online games that they may find they have less interest in the study．【高分句型一】It's also bad for their eyes and health．【高分句型二】（弊端）
Let's use the Internet properly and it will make our life richer and more colorful．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作要抓住要點(diǎn)．要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫的好的句子要進(jìn)行默寫，這樣在寫作時(shí)就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．