Question

假如你是李丹，請根據(jù)所給提示，用英文寫一篇推薦信，推薦王艷同學當選校優(yōu)秀學生。詞數(shù)：80左右。信的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)、

1.王艷，16歲；一個聰明的女孩

2.學東西快，數(shù)學、語文、英語學得很好。擅長歷史，對中國歷史了解很多。

3.喜愛體育�；@球打得很好，是�；@球隊的成員。

4.善良、勇敢，樂于助人。經(jīng)常在車上給老人讓座。經(jīng)常幫助王叔叔挑水。曾(once)用一塊濕毯子撲滅過一次火災(zāi)；

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award.

 

 

 

We think that Wang Yan should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Dan

 

Answer 1

I would like to recommend Wang Yan for the Best Student Award.

Wang Yan is 16 years old. She is a clever girl. She learns things quickly. She does well in Maths, Chinese and English. She is good at History. She knows (learns) a lot about Chinese history.She likes sports. She plays basketball well. She is a member of the school basketball team.She is kind and brave. She is helpful. She often gives a seat to the old people on the bus. She often helps Uncle Wang carry water. She once put out a fire with a wet blanket.

We think that Wang Yan should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Dan

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示寫一篇推薦信。本文所給材料比較詳細，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。

【亮點說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。

考點：材料作文