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【題目】書面表達(dá)

以My best friend為題，字?jǐn)?shù)60左右，包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，要點(diǎn)5請(qǐng)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1－2句，使其連貫、通順。要點(diǎn):

1.Nick是個(gè)帥氣的美國(guó)男孩。他身高接近1.80米。

2.他總是樂于助人，他經(jīng)常主動(dòng)提供給我?guī)椭��?/span>

3.他擅長(zhǎng)畫畫，在一次繪畫比賽中畫的最好。

4.他還癡迷于收集車模�？吹剿�的收藏（collections），我和小伙伴們都驚呆了！

5.他長(zhǎng)大后想當(dāng)一名社會(huì)工作者，這樣他可以……

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Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend

Nick is a smart American boy. He is almost 1.80metres.He’s always willing to help others. He often offers me help. He is good at drawing. Once he drew the best in the drawing competition. He’s also crazy about collecting model cars. My buddies and I were surprised at his collections. He would like to be a social worker when he grows up. He hopes to help more people.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如Once he drew the best in the drawing competition. He’s also crazy about collecting model cars. My buddies and I were surprised at his collections.等等。