Question

書面表達(dá)。(共一題，計(jì)10分)

請根據(jù)下面提供的信息，以My Penfriend 為題，寫一篇英語短文，字?jǐn)?shù)在70字左右。

要點(diǎn)如下，請適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象力，不必逐句翻譯：

王飛，一個(gè)14歲的男孩子，他來自上海，現(xiàn)就讀于上海實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)七年級(jí)一班。

戴著眼鏡，短發(fā)，看起來…今天他穿著… ,很好看。

學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，每天7點(diǎn)起床，晚上9點(diǎn)睡覺。

很少吃零食，因?yàn)樗�想要……最喜歡春節(jié)，因?yàn)椤��?/p>

待人很有禮貌，樂于助人，他經(jīng)�！�…多好的一個(gè)男孩子啊！

開頭已給出，不計(jì)總詞數(shù)。

Tip:上海實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué) Shanghai Experimental Secondary

My penfriend

I have a penfriend. His name is Wang Fei.

                                                                           

                                                                           

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I have many friends, and they have different favorite subjects. John’s favorite subject is computer because he thinks computer can help him a lot in his study. He is a computer fan. He likes playing computer games very much, and he is good at playing it. Jack likes art best because he likes drawing pictures a lot. Mary likes Chinese because her father is Chinese. Her father teaches her Chinese at home. She loves China very much, and she wants to know more about China. Bob think math is very interesting, so he likes math best. David likes P. E. because he likes doing sports. He is good at playing basketball and soccer…….

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)，是介紹一個(gè)朋友王飛。所以本文的人稱應(yīng)該是第三人稱，在完成句子是應(yīng)特別注意動(dòng)詞的單三形式，如has 、is、lives、likes等。在寫作時(shí)，要盡量利用上所給的提示內(nèi)容，表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)使句型順暢并符合英語的習(xí)慣表達(dá)方法。注意連詞的運(yùn)用，盡量少用排比句，因?yàn)橛⒄Z最忌諱重復(fù)。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文。

點(diǎn)評：在寫書面表達(dá)時(shí)首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱（如本題就要用第三人稱）；其次，應(yīng)注意動(dòng)詞的形式，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動(dòng)詞的形式（本題要注意單三形式）；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。