Question

16．同學(xué)們，在英語學(xué)習(xí)的過程中你遇到了哪些困難，針對這些問題采取了什么措施，對以后的英語學(xué)習(xí)有什么計(jì)劃？請寫一段100字左右的短文和大家一起分享吧．
要求：要有與主題相關(guān)的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．字跡工整．表達(dá)通順，得體．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一  
When people talk with me，I can't understand them 當(dāng)人們和我說話時，我聽不懂．這是when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時候．
高分句型二
I think keeping a diary is a good way to improve it我認(rèn)為寫日記是改善它的好方法．這是一個賓語從句，I think是主句，后面的是賓語從句，賓語從句中keeping a diary 是動名詞做主語．

解答 I like English，but I have some difficulties in learning English．When people talk with me，I can't understand them．【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】【要點(diǎn)一，在英語學(xué)習(xí)的過程中遇到的困難】In order to improve my listening ability，I often listen to the tape．I dare not speak English in public，so I take part in the English corner．I often do more reading．When I read，I often guess the meanings of the new words and try to get the main idea of the article．I am not good at writing．I think keeping a diary is a good way to improve it【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)二，針對這些問題采取了什么措施】
    I am sure I will make great progress as I work hard at it．【要點(diǎn)三，對以后的英語學(xué)習(xí)有什么計(jì)劃】

點(diǎn)評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．