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5．"平安出行，文明乘車"已成為人們普遍關(guān)心的一個(gè)社會熱門話題．請你根據(jù)圖表中所提示的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇短文．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

注意1．短文的開頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；3．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，并表達(dá)你個(gè)人的看法；
4．詞數(shù)90左右．
How can we keep safe when we go out？First，we must obey the traffic rules，especially when we cross the road．Second，we are supposed to help children and we're expected to offer our seats to people in need．Third，we should be careful when we get on a bus．
While we are on a bus，we should remember not to spit in public or throw litter around．Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others．What's more，smoking is not allowed on the bus．
In short，as students we should not only keep safe when we go out，but also be ready to help others．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是針對"平安出行，文明乘車"根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容寫一篇作文．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．要注意上下文的銜接．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．遵循交通規(guī)則
2．給有需要的人讓座
3．公共場所不隨意吐痰．
4．不大聲說話
5．個(gè)人看法

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
obey the rules 遵守規(guī)則
be supposed to do sth 應(yīng)該做某事
expect to do sth 期待做某事
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
what's more 再者
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
高分句型：
1．Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others．
這里是一個(gè)倒裝句，neither放句首需引起倒裝．
2．①In short，as students we should②not only keep safe ③when we go out，but also ③be ready to help others．
①in short簡言之，總結(jié)上文．
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個(gè)對等成分，這里是連接兩個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語．
③when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
④be ready to do sth準(zhǔn)備好做某事，樂于做某事．

解答 How can we keep safe when we go out？（引出下文）First，we must obey the traffic rules，especially when we cross the road．（遵循交通規(guī)則）Second，we are supposed to help children and the old and we're expected to offer our seats to people in need．（給有需要的人讓座）Third，we should be careful when we get on a bus．While we are on a bus，we should remember not to spit in public or throw litter around．（公共場所不隨意吐痰）Neither should we speak loudly to disturb others．（高分句型）（．不大聲說話）．What's more，smoking is not allowed on the bus．
In short，as students we should not only keep safe when we go out，but also be ready to help others．（高分句型）（我的看法）

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇圖表給出材料的作文，圖表中給出的材料較為豐富，考生在寫作時(shí)，圖表內(nèi)容必須包括在內(nèi)．在自己的觀點(diǎn)部分，考生需要自己適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，建議考生在平時(shí)的英語學(xué)習(xí)中積累一些常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語，出彩的發(fā)揮會給文章增色不少．