Question

14．根據(jù)中文和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文．請不要寫出你的真實(shí)校名和姓名．
某英文報(bào)紙以"A Good Sentence to Me"為題征文，請你投稿．請你從下面的三句話中選出你最喜歡的一句，并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷談?wù)勀阆矚g它的理由．

☆The more we read，the more we will know．
☆Helping others is one of the gifts we have to give in life．
☆I(lǐng)f we're not making mistakes，then we're not doing anything．
A Good Sentence to Me
"If we're not making mistakes，then we're not doing anything．"This is my favorite sentence because from it I have learned that if we are afraid of making mistakes，we will never experiment．
One day，I wanted to cook lunch by myself．But it was really a hard job because I had never cooked before．I didn't know anything about cooking times，and as a result，I overcooked my lunch．It tasted terrible．When my mom came back home，I told her my story．She said，"It's OK．You did it anrway．"
I think that I had a chance to understand the valuable role that mistakes play in life and making mistakes is the key to learning．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  This is my favorite sentence because from it I have learned that if we are afraid of making mistakes，we will never experiment．     這是我最喜歡的句子，因?yàn)閺闹形抑�道如果我們害怕犯錯誤，我們就永遠(yuǎn)不會嘗試．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句是一般將來時，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時．
 高分句型二
When my mom came back home，I told her my story  當(dāng)我媽媽回家的時候，我告訴她我的故事．這是when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時候．

解答 A Good Sentence to Me
"If we're not making mistakes，then we're not doing anything．"This is my favorite sentence because from it I have learned that if we are afraid of making mistakes，we will never experiment．【高分句型一，注意狀語從句的使用】【開頭點(diǎn)明主題】
One day，I wanted to cook lunch by myself．But it was really a hard job because I had never cooked before．I didn't know anything about cooking times，and as a result，I overcooked my lunch．It tasted terrible．When my mom came back home，I told her my story【高分句型二，注意時間狀語從句的使用】．She said，"It's OK．You did it anyway．"【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹自己的經(jīng)歷】
I think that I had a chance to understand the valuable role that mistakes play in life and making mistakes is the key to learning．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點(diǎn)評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．