Question

【題目】書面表達（共1小題，滿分10分）

人民公園是人們放松休閑的好去處。請根據(jù)下表中人們以前和現(xiàn)在行為的變化，以“Behave well in our daily lives”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，注意時態(tài)，適當使用被動語態(tài)，并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?/span>。

以前	現(xiàn)在
四處亂扔雜物	廢物入箱，愛護環(huán)境
摘花毀樹，傷害動物	保護植物，關(guān)愛動物
隨處抽煙，亂涂亂畫	人人禁煙，保護名勝

注意：1.短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮。

2.詞數(shù)100左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.參考詞匯：行為 behave, v. behavior n.

扔垃圾 drop litter 垃圾箱 dustbin 毀壞 destroy

名勝 places of interest

Behave well in our daily lives

The People’s Park is a good place for people to relax .Every day many people come here to play and exercise .But a few years ago,

Answer 1

【答案】 Behave well in our daily lives

The People’s Park is a good place for people to relax. Every day many people come here to play and exercise.But a few years ago,a lot of bad behaviors happened quite often.Some threw litter everywhere and painted on the walls. Some picked flowers, destroyed trees and hurt animals. And even worse, some smoked in the woods. How dangerous!Luckily,things have changed now.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly to animals.Nobody smokes around the woods and places of interest are well kept.All these changes make us happy.As a student, I think we should know it’s our duty to protect the environment.In order to make our city more beautiful, let’s behave well and try our best to help fight against bad behaviors.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。所給材料內(nèi)容要點突出，條理清楚，我們要做的就是用英語把這些要點內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。行文時要注意人稱、時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點: 這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內(nèi)容，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上使用多種句式，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語如感嘆句和被動句、be friendly to sb、it’s one’s duty to do sth、try one’s best to do sth等，這為文章增色不少。