Question

很多人認(rèn)為當(dāng)今的中學(xué)生有自己鮮明的特點(diǎn)。他們多才多藝，擅長(zhǎng)琴棋書(shū)畫(huà)；同時(shí)也常常以自我為中心，很少為他人著想。作為中學(xué)生，你認(rèn)為自己最大的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是什么？（請(qǐng)舉例說(shuō)明）缺點(diǎn)是什么？（請(qǐng)舉例說(shuō)明）你應(yīng)該如何揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短，做更好的自己？
要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。    
2. 注意不遺漏要點(diǎn)。
It’s said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points.           
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Answer 1

One possible version：
   I am a middle school student. I am thirteen years old. And I have many hobbies.
I like drawing, I enjoy playing football, I am fond of fishing. As a middle school student, I can try my best to do many things. I like sports. I like helping others. I can do much house work. I can take care of myself. IPlease believe me.
But, Sometimes I can’t believe myself. And I often lose confidence in study. And I often make mistakes in my homework. I am afraid of giving a talk in front of the whole class. Please help me if you can.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ).如: be fond of …習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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