Question

假如你叫小明，你現(xiàn)在給剛認(rèn)識(shí)的筆友Tony寫一封信。在信中你介紹自己的情況：八年級(jí)學(xué)生，家住衢州龍游；你的愛(ài)好是：收集賽車模型，喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，尤其是各種球類運(yùn)動(dòng)，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)感興趣，也會(huì)唱很多英文歌；將來(lái)想去英國(guó)參觀、旅游或?qū)W習(xí)。

要求：字?jǐn)?shù)70左右，表達(dá)要簡(jiǎn)潔、清晰、流暢

Dear Tony,

???? I am so glad to introduce myself to you._______________________________________????????????????

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Yours

Xiaoming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tony,

I am so glad to introduce myself to you. I study in a junior middle school. I am in Grade Two. Now I live in Longyou,Quzhou.I am interested in collecting model cars. I like sports very much. Playing basketball is my favourite sport. I also enjoyed learning English. I like singing English songs. I have learned a lot of English songs since I began to study English. I take great interests in Britain and I am looking forward to visiting Britain and studying there in the future.

Best wishes,

Yours

Xiaoming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求給筆友Tony寫一封信，介紹自己的情況。這篇作文給出要點(diǎn)比較多，要理清要點(diǎn)，把要點(diǎn)一一表達(dá)出來(lái)。句型盡量要瘋豐富些，不要太過(guò)單一。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅介紹喜好時(shí)注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如在表達(dá)喜好時(shí)用了：be interested in doing, like…very much,…is my favorite …,enjoy doing等，使短文看起來(lái)句型豐富。另外在介紹學(xué)英語(yǔ)歌時(shí)，用到了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，look forward to doing，使文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：給材料作文