Question

1．下面六幅圖片描述的是今天早晨發(fā)生的一件事，假設(shè)你是圖中的小男孩，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇日記，記述事件發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)．
要求：1．語(yǔ)句規(guī)范、通順，情節(jié)合理、完整；
2．記述過(guò)程中要適當(dāng)使用對(duì)話，使描述更加生動(dòng)、形象；
3．詞數(shù)：80～100詞左右，日記的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校等信息．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，she put some dirty clothes into the washing machine，and then she went back to the bedroom①to look for other dirty clothes ②with its door open．首先，她把一些臟衣服放進(jìn)洗衣機(jī)里，然后她開著門回到臥室去尋找其他臟衣服．
①動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)
②with+名詞+形容詞，作伴隨狀語(yǔ)
高分句型二：
Mum，①could you please ②help me clean my T-shirt？媽媽，你能幫我洗一下我的T恤嗎？
①could you please do sth請(qǐng)求某人做某事的客氣表達(dá)
②help sb do sth幫助某人做某事

解答 Monday，June 13
This morning Mom didn't go  to work and she wanted to do some washing at home．
First，she put some dirty clothes into the washing machine，and then she went back to the bedroom to look for other dirty clothes with its door open．【高分句型一】At that monment，my pet cat ran out of the bedroom happily and rushed into the washing machine．When Mum returned，she didn't notice the cat，and she closed the door of the washing machine．Just then，I found a dirty T-shirt，"Mum，could you please help me clean my T-shirt？"【高分句型二】"Of course，my dear．"Mum opened the door．Suddenly，my pet cat rushed out of the washing machine．Mom and I are both shocked．My god!What would happen if Ididn't give Mum the shirt？【詳細(xì)敘述事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 看圖作文的基本步驟：
一、列出要點(diǎn)．明確寫作的具體內(nèi)容，仔細(xì)尋找全部要點(diǎn)，做到要點(diǎn)無(wú)遺漏．
二、依據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，選擇確立可供自己使用的熟悉詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型．做到"不求難，不求異，只求準(zhǔn)"．
三、將要點(diǎn)譯成基本句子．盡量用熟悉、簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)，避免因用大量的長(zhǎng)句和復(fù)合句而造成的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．忌用漢語(yǔ)思維生造句子．
四、按一定的時(shí)間、空間及邏輯順序或情節(jié)發(fā)展對(duì)基本句子進(jìn)行有序的排列組合．
五、適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接過(guò)渡詞將句子連接成文．
六、細(xì)心檢查錯(cuò)漏：檢查人稱和主謂是否一致；檢查時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)是否正確，檢查語(yǔ)句和措詞是否恰當(dāng)；檢查拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否無(wú)誤；檢查內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否齊全．