假如你是Tom,你的美國筆友Tony給你來信說準(zhǔn)備來合肥來玩，請你告訴他一些相關(guān)的情況。不少于70字。

合肥是個(gè)美麗的城市，有700萬人口，有很多名勝古跡（places of interest.）

合肥冬天很冷，夏天很熱，最好春天或秋天來合肥。

可以從美國乘飛機(jī)到北京，再乘火車到合肥，因?yàn)槌嘶疖囎钍娣?/span>

Dear Tony,

I am happy to know that you will come to Hefei.Here is some information about Hefei.

Hefei is a very beautiful city.. It has a population of 7 million.It also have a lot of places of interest.The weather in Hefei is very cold in winter ,and in summer it becomes hot .So ,if you comes to Hefei ,you’d better come here in spring or winter.You can have a wonderful time here .You can fly to Beijing from American ,then you can take trains to Hefei.Because taking trains is the most comfortable.

 

 

 

I hope this helps.

Yours,

Tom

 

Hefei is a very beautiful city.. It has a population of 7 million.It also have a lot of places of interest.The weather in Hefei is very cold in winter ,and in summer it becomes hot .So ,if you comes to Hefei ,you’d better come here in spring or winter.You can have a wonderful time here .You can fly to Beijing from American ,then you can take trains to Hefei.Because taking trains is the most comfortable.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，作文題目已經(jīng)給出，而且列出了三條要求。寫作文時(shí)要仔細(xì)審題，每一條都要寫到，注意前后句的連接，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章主要寫介紹合肥，要點(diǎn)全部都寫出，并且增加了一些內(nèi)容使文章更通順，更符合要求。文中使用很多短語，讓文章更加出彩，如a population of，if you comes to Hefei，you’d better , fly to Beijing，taking trains”等。在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中，要注意點(diǎn)滴積累，這樣在寫作文時(shí)才能靈活運(yùn)用。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

 

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