Question

10．請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇題為"The Teacher I Never Forget"的短文．內(nèi)容包括：
（1）人物的外貌、性格、愛(ài)好；
（2）使你難忘之處：
（3）感謝老師，祝愿老師．
短文要求不得在短文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱，老師的姓名請(qǐng)一律使用Mr Zhang 或 Ms Zhang．
內(nèi)容清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確．卷面整潔，詞數(shù)80左右．作文的 標(biāo)題和幵頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
The Teacher I Never Forget
How times flies！Three years has passed since I became a middle school student．I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers．The teacher I never forget is．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"The Teacher I Never Forget"為題談?wù)勀阕铍y忘的老師．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
（1）人物的外貌、性格、愛(ài)好；
（2）使你難忘之處：
（3）感謝老師，祝愿老師．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
make sb/sth+adj讓某人/某物怎么樣
be strict with sb 對(duì)某人嚴(yán)格
allow sb to do sth允許某人做某事
without 除了…沒(méi)有…
with one's help在某人的幫助下
in the future將來(lái)
 It's no use doing sth．做某事沒(méi)用/只是白費(fèi)力氣
高分句型：
He never①allows us to②pretend that we know ③what we don't know．
①allow sb to do sth允許某人做某事，前面的never表示否定．
②pretend 后加上賓語(yǔ)從句．
③從句中的know又加賓語(yǔ)從句．
He often tells us①that ②it's no use memorizing new words③without understanding
①作為tell的賓語(yǔ)從句，引導(dǎo)詞that．
②It's no use doing sth 做某事沒(méi)用/只是白費(fèi)力氣，其中動(dòng)詞-ing形式是主語(yǔ)，it 是形式主語(yǔ)．這種動(dòng)詞-ing作主語(yǔ)，it 作形式主語(yǔ)的句型還有：1．It is no good doing sth．做某事不好/沒(méi)用/不行
2．It's a waste of time/money doing sth．做某事是白費(fèi)時(shí)間/金錢
3．It's fun doing sth．做某事很有趣
③without 除了…沒(méi)有…是介詞，后加名詞或動(dòng)名詞．

解答 The Teacher I Never Forget
How times flies！Three years has passed since I became a middle school student．I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers．The teacher I never forget is Mr zhang，an English teacher．He's a tall man with thick glasses．He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us．He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting（外貌、性格、愛(ài)好）．He's kind but is strict with us．He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know．（高分句型）He often tells us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding．（高分句型）My English has greatly improved with his help（難忘之處）．I must say many thanks to Mr Zhang．I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future．（感謝老師，祝愿老師）

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