【題目】書面表達(共1題,計10分)

假如你是張敏,你的家鄉(xiāng)是杭州,請向你的朋友們介紹一下你的家鄉(xiāng)杭州吧。

要點:1.杭州是一個美麗的城市,空氣清新;2. 它以西湖(the West Lake)而出名;在杭州可以買到許多漂亮的衣服;3.它離上海不遠,坐汽車大約需要兩個小時;4.歡迎朋友們來杭州,希望大家能玩的開心。

要求:1.語句通順連貫,符合題目中的要點; 2. 80詞左右。

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【答案】

Hello, I am Zhangmin. My hometown is Hangzhou. It is a beautiful city and the air is very fresh there. It is famous for the West Lake. Many visitors come to the West Lake every year. You can buy a lot of beautiful clothes there. Hangzhou is not far away from Shanghai. And it takes about two hours to go to Shanghai. Welcome to my hometown and hope you can have a good time here.

【解析】

試題分析:這篇作文要求我們以張敏的身份,介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)杭州。題目中給出了我們寫作的具體內(nèi)容,因此我們需要用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達出來即可。通過審題可知,這篇作文我們應該主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),第一人稱來敘述。注意語言要合乎英語的表達規(guī)范,不要遺漏要點。而且我們應盡量使用好的句型和短語,如因…而出名,我們可以用短語be famous for,這樣可以增加文章的表現(xiàn)力。結(jié)合使用一些連詞,使文章整體意思連貫,表達流暢。

寫作亮點:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文,作者按照題目的要求介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)。首先這篇作文內(nèi)容完整,意思連貫。作者介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)杭州是個美麗的城市,以及它有名的地方,還提到了跟上海的距離。其次這篇作文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,短文都用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),句子表達合乎語法規(guī)范。最后短文中用到了比較好的句型和句式,如It is famous for the West Lake、Hangzhou is not far away from Shanghai. 、And it takes about two hours to go to Shanghai、 Welcome to my hometown and hope you can have a good time here等。

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