Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)
假設(shè)你是學(xué)校Health Club的成員，最近你對(duì)你校學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)有關(guān)生活方式（our lifestyle）的調(diào)查，相關(guān)信息見(jiàn)下表。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容為校廣播站寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的英文廣播稿。廣播稿的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

交通方式	很多學(xué)生坐公共汽車上學(xué)，一些學(xué)生由家長(zhǎng)開(kāi)車送到，很少（a few）騎車或走路上學(xué)；
飲食和運(yùn)動(dòng)	喜歡吃漢堡，冰激淋；不喜歡吃水果和蔬菜；很少鍛煉。

Hello everyone! I’m from The Health Club. I want to tell you something about our lifestyle.
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                             

Answer 1

Hello everyone! I’m from The Health Club. I want tell you something about our lifestyle. Many students go to school by bus, some students go to school in their parents’ cars. But only a few students goes to school by bike or on foot. And they like hamburgers and ice cream, but they don’t often eat fruit and vegetables. The students don’t exercise often. I think it’s bad for their health.

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作首先對(duì)寫(xiě)作的總體目的進(jìn)行陳述I want tell you something about our lifestyle.來(lái)表達(dá)寫(xiě)作的目的。然后根據(jù)文章的提綱來(lái)講述學(xué)生們的交通出行方式，如by bus，in their parents’ cars，by bike or on foot來(lái)表達(dá)相應(yīng)的意思。最后對(duì)學(xué)生們的飲食習(xí)慣進(jìn)行介紹并提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：初中英語(yǔ)的作文特別是初一的作文，著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在“準(zhǔn)”字上下功夫。在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面。對(duì)于中學(xué)作文的寫(xiě)作，盡量將所學(xué)的知識(shí)運(yùn)用到作文中，寫(xiě)出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，考試時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。