Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封推薦信，推薦你班的Ricky 為本年度的青年獎(jiǎng)獲得者。

姓 名	Ricky
性 格	善良，友好，樂(lè)于助人
愛(ài) 好	看書(shū)，打羽毛球，…….
學(xué)習(xí)情況	各門(mén)功課成績(jī)好，對(duì)歷史知識(shí)了解很多。 最喜歡英語(yǔ)，每天花很多時(shí)間練習(xí)說(shuō)英語(yǔ)。 ……
主要事跡	上周，一個(gè)八歲的小男孩迷了路，他把小男孩送到警察局，小男孩的父母很感激他。

要求：

1．詞數(shù)80左右，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I want to recommend Ricky for this year’s Youth Award.

 

Yours faithfully,

Wang Lei

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I want to recommend Ricky for this year’s Youth Award.He is kind,friendly and helpful.He likes reading and playing badminton.He is good at organizing class activities.He is a top student and has good grades in all subjects.He knows a lot about history.He likes English best.He spends a lot of time practicing speaking English every day. Last week a little boy lost his way.He took him to the police station.The boy’s parents were very grateful to him.I will be very happy if he can get this award.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Wang Lei

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)提示可知這是一封推薦信，所以一定要符合信的格式，因?yàn)檫@是推薦別人，不是自薦信，所以句子的主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是第三人稱單數(shù)，這里敘述的是他平時(shí)的表現(xiàn)，所以句子的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。當(dāng)然上周發(fā)生的事情用一般過(guò)去式。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：I want to recommend Ricky for this year’s Youth Award. He spends a lot of time practicing speaking English every day. .I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.等。短文還用了一些連詞如and，if等，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)不再單一。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。