Question

助人為樂(lè)是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。你在生活或?qū)W習(xí)中是否幫助過(guò)別人？是否接受過(guò)別人的幫助呢？學(xué)校英文廣播站正在開展以“助人為樂(lè)”為話題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷向廣播站投稿，簡(jiǎn)述你是如何幫助他人的，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)助人為樂(lè)的感受和你今后在這方面的打算。
要求：1、語(yǔ)言通順、連貫，符合邏輯；2、詞數(shù)：80~100.
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Answer 1

One possible version:
I enjoy helping others both in school and out of school. In school, I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home, I always give my seat to old people or women with babies on the bus. I think helping others can not only make us happy, but also help us get more experience in life. I will go on doing this as much as possible and work hard at my lessons in order to help others better in the future.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要是結(jié)合自己的在日常生活中的做法和今后的打算，因此一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)應(yīng)用的比較多，所以在寫作時(shí)，要注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。
溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: both in school and out of school；get on well with；I think helping others can not only make us happy, but also help us get more experience in life。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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