Question

11．親愛的同學(xué)，在過去的三年中，你的老師與你朝夕相處，他們關(guān)心你、幫助你、教育你．現(xiàn)在初中生活即將結(jié)束，假如你是李華，請給你的高老師寫一封信，表達(dá)你的感激之情．
要求：
1、文章內(nèi)容符合題意，可參考上圖所給提示詞；
2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名；
3、詞數(shù)90左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Miss Gao，
How time flies!                   be grateful to           ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I didn't prepare for the exam because I played computer games too much those days．我沒有準(zhǔn)備考試，因?yàn)槟切┨煳彝骐娔X游戲太多了．這是一個because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，因?yàn)椤��?br />高分句型二
I will never forget that day when you talked with me face to face．我永遠(yuǎn)不會忘記和你面對面交談的那一天．這是一個when引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞是day．

解答 Dear Miss Zhang，
How time flies!My life in junior school will come to an end soon．Life was happy in the past three years，but there is one bad thing in my mind，I failed an important exam last year【開頭點(diǎn)明主題】，I didn't prepare for the exam because I played computer games too much those days【高分句型一，注意狀語從句的使用】，which made my parents and you  worried．I will never forget that day when you talked with me face to face【高分句型二，注意定語從句的使用】．It's a pity that I failed an exam but I am happy that I learned a lesson from this failure with your help．That is，no pains no gains．Hard work leads to success and no one can have a harvest without any effort．Therefore，I will study harder than ever．I won't waste my valuable time any more．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹老師怎么幫助你】
Now we are about to graduate，I want to say thanks to you，my dear teacher．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】
Best wishes!

點(diǎn)評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．