Question

俗話說“失去了才懂得珍惜”。三年過去了，我們即將畢業(yè)。你是否有一些讓你感到遺憾或后悔的事情？如果再給你一次機(jī)會的話…… 請你以“Give Me Another Chance”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，告訴我們你的想法。開頭已給出，不計入單詞總數(shù)。
溫馨提示: 短文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點或所在學(xué)校名稱。
Give Me Another Chance
How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.

Answer 1

Give Me Another Chance
How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.
Now, I am leaving our school. I want to enter a good school, but I am weak in English. I’m afraid I can’t succeed. I regret that I haven’t learned English well in the past three years. I missed many chances though my teacher encouraged me.
As the saying goes, “It’s never too late to learn”. If I have another chance, I should try my best to learn it well. I will practice listening, reading, speaking and writing as much as I can. I will preview lessons before class, listen carefully in class and finish my homework on time. I will ask my teacher for help if I have trouble. I believe I will cherish this chance and do it better.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題，根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是過去時態(tài)和將來時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)和時間狀語的搭配，注意條件從句的應(yīng)用。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。