Question

10．下面有幾條從"美國中學(xué)生守則"中摘錄的校規(guī)．請你參照這些內(nèi)容，給你們學(xué)校制定一條校規(guī)，并用事實說明制定該校規(guī)的理由．
American school rules
1．Don't cheat while taking a test．
2．You may talk to your teacher in your seat．
3．Please raise your hand when answering questions．
要求：
1）不使用真實的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息．不使用上面出現(xiàn)的校規(guī)．
2）內(nèi)容完整，書寫整齊．詞數(shù)80左右．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
    I want to make a school rule．It is
                                               

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
So I think it's bad for students to take mobile phones to school．所以我認(rèn)為學(xué)生帶手機去學(xué)校是不好的．
 I think 后為賓語從句作think的賓語，省略了關(guān)系代詞that．
賓語從句中為固定句型It+be+形容詞+for sb to do sth的使用，意為：對于某人做什么是…的；it為形式主語，后面的不定式為真正的主語．
高分句型二：
It affects not only themselves but also other students．它不僅影響自己，也影響其他學(xué)生．
not only…but also…不但…而且…這里是連接兩個并列的賓語．

解答 I want to make a school rule．It's"Don't take mobile phones to school．"【制定的校規(guī)是什么】
Many of my classmates take mobile phones to school．They use them to play games．Sometimes they send messages to each other in class．Sometimes they read novels at night and often feel tired and sleepy in class the next day．Sometimes they even use phones to cheat in exams．【用事實說明為什么制定此校規(guī)】
So I think it's bad for students to take mobile phones to school．【高分句型一】It affects not only themselves but also other students．【高分句型二】What's more，the students with phones may not be concentrated on their studies．Phones cost their parents'money．【結(jié)合手機的不良影響進(jìn)一步說明制定該校規(guī)的理由】

點評 解答這種題目時，我們應(yīng)該仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點． 要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫． 根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣． 在平常的學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，讓文章更出彩．