請以“My dream”為題，寫一篇短文。

1.　語句通順流暢，時態(tài)正確。

2. 字?jǐn)?shù)在80個字左右。

 

 

 

 

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.

To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。話題貼近學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活，學(xué)生有較大的發(fā)揮空間。動筆前要認(rèn)真審題，挖掘深層內(nèi)涵，勾勒要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)話題可知本文主要是第一人稱，行文時注意時態(tài)語及主謂一致問題，同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復(fù)合句，使文章自然流暢。同時，使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如：be friendly to sb、cheered sb up、With the help of、Since then、hoped to do sth、In order to、as much as possible、help sb out of、come true等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。

 

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