Question

4．Please write a passage of basketball in about 90 words according to the following mind map．

Basketball
James Naismith invented basketball．The first basketball game was played on December 21，1981．Basketball became an Olympic event in Berlin in 1936．The NBA games are the most famous in the world and the CBA games are becoming more popular in China．There are two teams in a basketball game．Players on the same team must work together to get the ball into the other team's basket．At the same time，they need to stop the competing team from getting the ball into their own basket．
Basketball is very popular around the world．It is played by 100 million people in over 200 countries．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．以"Basketball"為題，對籃球這一運(yùn)動項目做介紹．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主，人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．其次考生可從四個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1． 籃球是由誰發(fā)明的；
2． 籃球這項運(yùn)動的發(fā)展過程；
3． 打籃球的方法和規(guī)則（籃球比賽中有幾個隊，隊員如果打籃球）  
4． 籃球的受歡迎程度如何（舉例說明籃球是如何受歡迎的）
重點(diǎn)短語：
奧運(yùn)賽事 an Olympic event
最著名the most famous
團(tuán)結(jié)協(xié)作work together
另一支球隊the other team
同時at the same time
高分句型：
1．The NBA games are the most famous in the world．NBA比賽是世界上最著名的籃球比賽．
the most famous 最著名，形容詞最高級
2．Players on the same team must work together to get the ball into the other team's basket．
同一個隊里的隊員們必須團(tuán)結(jié)協(xié)作，把球投入另一支隊的籃里面．
 work together to do sth．團(tuán)結(jié)協(xié)作做某事
3．It is played by 100 million people in over 200 countries．
200多個國家的一億人打籃球．
一般現(xiàn)在時的被動語態(tài)：主語+am/is/are+動詞的過去分詞

解答 Basketball
    James Naismith invented basketball（籃球發(fā)明人）．The first basketball game was played on December 21，1981．Basketball became an Olympic event in Berlin in 1936．The NBA games are the most famous in the world（高分句型） and the CBA games are becoming more popular in China．（籃球的發(fā)展過程）There are two teams in a basketball game．Players on the same team must work together to get the ball into the other team's basket（高分句型）．At the same time，they need to stop the competing team from getting the ball into their own basket（打籃球的方法和規(guī)則）．
    Basketball is very popular around the world．It is played by 100 million people in over 200 countries（高分句型）．（籃球的受歡迎程度）

點(diǎn)評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時，要先確定好時態(tài)，再注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．