Question

為了創(chuàng)造“綠色低碳環(huán)�！钡奈拿鞒鞘�，上個(gè)月諸暨的公共自行車開(kāi)始使用。自行車�？空旧蠉湫碌木G色自行車成了諸暨的一道亮麗的風(fēng)景。請(qǐng)以此為話題，根據(jù)下表提示，談?wù)勻T自行車與開(kāi)汽車的利弊。80詞左右。

Bicycle	Car
1. 無(wú)污染，低碳，環(huán)保	污染多
2. 使用方便	速度快，但停車難。
3. 花錢少，且有利于健康。	開(kāi)車花錢多。
你的觀點(diǎn)：

 提示詞：low carbon(低碳)  protect environment(保護(hù)環(huán)境)  convenient (方便)
注意：1.文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
2.開(kāi)頭已給出見(jiàn)答題卷，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，你只需接著寫(xiě)：
3.觀點(diǎn)至少在兩點(diǎn)以上；
In order to create a city with the name green 、low carbon and civilization ，Zhu ji began to use the public bicycles last month, It has been a beautiful scenery that so many new green bicycles stand in a line.                   
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Answer 1

In order to create a city with the name green  low carbon and civilization ，Zhu ji began to use the public bicycles last month, It has been a beautiful scenery that so many new green bicycles stand in a line. In fact, bicycles make no pollution as a way of low carbon life and are more convenient than cars. And if you ride bicycles often, you can take exercise and needn’t spend much money on it and you can go anywhere you like by bike. However, if you drive a car, you will not only spend a lot more money on it but also it is too difficult to park. Although the car is faster, it produces more and more waste gas and pollute the environment around us. To protect the environment, we should ride bicycles often instead of driving cars.  

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章主要是自行車和小汽車的比較。文中使用了比較級(jí)句型，讓步狀語(yǔ)從句等較高級(jí)的語(yǔ)法，而且還應(yīng)用了不定式等非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞以及使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞however，and，not only…but also…等為文章增色不少。