Question

書面表達(dá)（15分）

假如你是Jack,青少年論壇節(jié)目的主持人,昨天你收到David的來信,他有一些問題需要你給他提出有益的建議,根據(jù)以下提示為他寫一封80詞的回信.

.1. 早晨沒有時(shí)間吃早飯,上午很疲勞,不能認(rèn)真聽講;

2. 喜歡吃肉,不喜歡吃蔬菜;喜歡喝飲料,不喜歡喝水;

3. 喜歡看電視或玩電腦,不喜歡戶外運(yùn)動(dòng);

3. 體質(zhì)很弱,經(jīng)常感冒

注意字跡工整,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出.

Dear David,

It was nice to see your letter. I will give you some advice(建議).

 

 

 

 

I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Jack

 

Answer 1

In your letter, I learn that your body is bad and you often have a cold. I am so sorry to hear that. I think you should have breakfast in the morning. Or you will be tired all the morning and you cannot listen to lessons carefully. Because breakfast is the most important meal in a day.

Besides, you should eat more vegetables and less meat. You should drink more water and less drink. Thus you can form a healthy diet habit. What’s more, you should spend more time on sports outside not TV or computer.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: Besides, you should eat more vegetables and less meat.和What’s more, you should spend more time on sports outside not TV or computer.等句式。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。