Question

針對(duì)下面的話題，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況，寫(xiě)一篇短文。
Do you have a healthy lifestyle? What is your healthy lifestyle?
要求： 1. 敘述清楚，有條理性； 2. 語(yǔ)句通順、自然；語(yǔ)法正確，使用多種句式； 3. 詞數(shù)在70左右。

Answer 1

I have a healthy lifestyle and I think this is very important. I like to eat healthy food every day. I often eat bread, noodles, porridge and rice. They help children grow. I like fruit and vegetables because they help us keep in good health. I don’t eat too much meat because it will make me fat. I also do sports every day, so I always feel happy and work harder after sports. Running is good exercise. I often go running in the morning. That makes me feel like eating breakfast. Usually, I play football in the afternoon.

解析試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，寫(xiě)一寫(xiě)自己打算。由于在要點(diǎn)中只給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。根據(jù)要求可知本句主要是一般現(xiàn)在及過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
考點(diǎn)：命題作文的寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。