Question

最近你和父母就你要參加校籃球隊(duì)一事交換了意見，各自闡述了觀點(diǎn)。 現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你參照表內(nèi)所提供的信息，寫一篇英語短文。

Your parents’ ideas	Your ideas
1. less time for study	finish homework in time
2. not strong enough	want to be stronger
3. get easily hurt	be careful
4.be with bad students	… …
5. … …		… …

 
注意： 1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所提及內(nèi)容，省略號(hào)部分務(wù)必補(bǔ)充完整。
2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
3. 表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及本人姓名。
Should I join the school basketball team？
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether or not I should be allowed to join the school basketball team.

Answer 1

One possible version:
Should I join the school basketball team？
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether or not I should join the school basketball team.
They don’t think I am strong enough to be a good basketball player. I might get hurt while playing. And they hope I will spend more time on my studies. They think the students who like playing basketball are mostly bad students and playing sports will need more energy.
However, I don’t agree with them. I know they care about me. But becoming a member of the school team is my dream, you know. I’ll try my best to keep a balance between my study and sport. And I can be more careful when playing. The other members are friendly and helpful. I can make friends with them. Playing basketball can make me stronger and more energetic. It’s more important for me to learn how to work with others in a team.

試題分析：這是一篇圖表類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于圖表類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。