Question

為豐富中學(xué)生的環(huán)保知識(shí)，培養(yǎng)防護(hù)意識(shí)，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社針對(duì)我國(guó)霧霾天氣頻現(xiàn)，危害嚴(yán)重的現(xiàn)狀，決定在學(xué)生中舉行英語(yǔ)征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文參賽。

霧霾天氣的危害	對(duì)人們的健康有害 影響交通
霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因	空氣污染 人們沒有足夠地關(guān)注環(huán)境,自然和人類之間失去了平衡
自我防護(hù)的方法	減少外出的機(jī)會(huì) 盡可能地勤洗手和臉 ……（自己的觀點(diǎn),至少2點(diǎn)）

注意：
1．詞數(shù)：90詞； 
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 
參考詞匯：霧霾天氣：hazy weather 

Answer 1

Nowadays, the hazy weather frequently appears in our country. It has not only done harm to people’s health, but also affected the public transportation. Terrible accidents happen every now and then, some highways have to be shut down because of the low visibility.    
Obviously, air pollution is the main factor that has resulted in the frequency of hazy weather. At the same time, people don’t pay much attention to the environment so it lost the balance between nature and human beings.
To students, opportunities for going out should be decreased. We should also wash faces and hands with running water as often as possible. And do not forget to wear a good-quality mask to protect yourself while going out. I hope we will regain a fresh, clean and bright world soon

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文從三方面寫霧霾天氣的危害、霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因、和自我防護(hù)的方法。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如not only...but also, do harm to,now and then,have to,shut down,because of , result in,At the same time, pay attention to,between...and, as often as possible 等短語(yǔ); 用到了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)ome highways have to be shut down because of the low visibility，opportunities for going out should be decreased; 并列句It has not only done harm to people’s health, but also affected the public transportation；定語(yǔ)從句air pollution is the main factor that has resulted in the frequency of hazy weather；賓語(yǔ)從句I hope we will regain a fresh, clean and bright world soon；祈使句 do not forget to wear a good-quality mask to protect yourself while going out.文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。