Question

1．下面是大林寫給他朋友Jim的信，信中描述了他的煩惱．請以他朋友Jim的身份給他回信，給他指出問題，提出建議、不少于60詞．信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
I have many problems these days．First，I had a fight with my younger sister，my parents was angry with me．That made me very sad．Then，I borrowed a new pen from my best friend Wang Qiang．Unluckily，I broke it by accident．That made Wang Qiang unhappy．What should I do？Can you help me？
Yours，Daling
Dear Daring，
I am very sorry to hear that you have so many problems．                                      
Yours，
Jim．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I am very sorry to hear that you have so many problema．我聽說你有這么多的問題，很抱歉．be sorry to do sth抱歉做某事，so many 如此多．
②Don't forget that you are a boy--a little man．別忘了你是個男孩．句子中Don't 引導(dǎo)的是祈使句的否定句，直接在句首加Don't；that you are a boy--a little man作forget的賓語，構(gòu)成賓語從句．

解答 Dear Dalin，
I am very sorry to hear that you have so many problems．（高分句型）Don't worry too much，I have some advice here．（引出話題）First，you should be kind to your sister，have a talk with your parents，and say sorry to them．Don't forget that you are a boy--a little man．（高分句型）You shouldn't fight with a girl．Second，you can buy a new pen for your good friend．He may love his new pen friend very much．If you give a new pen to him．He can be happy again．And you can be good friends again too．（給Dalin的兩條建議）
Hope my advice can be helpful．Good luck to you．（祝愿）

點評 動筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．