Question

7．長大意味著什么？是關(guān)心、幫助銅須也？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、匯報(bào)親朋師長？還是…請(qǐng)以I am not a child any longer為題，記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表達(dá)你對(duì)長大的理解．
要求：
1.80次左右；
2．語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔；
穩(wěn)重不得使用真實(shí)姓名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital．（高分句型）
本句是一個(gè)主從復(fù)合句，know后加的賓語從句，其中not…until直達(dá)…才，引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
They both said the meal was very delicious，although it tasted salty．（高分句型）
although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，表示雖然，其中主句還是一個(gè)含有賓語從句the meal was very delicious的復(fù)合句

解答 I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years．I used to be weak and short．But now，I am strong and as tall as my father．The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others．（我的改變）
 It was a Wednesday evening．When I went back home，no one was in．So I cooked the meal．I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital．【高分句型一】They both said the meal was very delicious，although it tasted salty．【高分句型二】At bedtime，I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet．My mother said，"Dear，you have really grown up．"（經(jīng)歷的一件事）
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．