Question

3．如今，隨著亞健康的人越來越多，更多的人開始關(guān)注健康．你認(rèn)為怎樣才能保持健康呢？請根據(jù)提示以‘How to keep healthy'為題，寫一篇英語短文來
簡單說一下保持健康的方法．
要點(diǎn)提示：
（1）早睡早起（2）適當(dāng)鍛煉（3）平衡膳食
要求：
（1）短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)．
How to keep healthy
Everyone wants to be healthy，but do you know how to keep healthy？
                                           

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First，it's necessary to have a good eating habit．首先，必須要有一個(gè)好的飲食習(xí)慣．
it is+adj+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
【高分句型二】
If we try our best，we will be very healthy．如果我們盡力，我們就會很健康．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．

解答 How to keep healthy
Everyone wants to be healthy，but do you know how to keep healthy？
First，it's necessary to have a good eating habit．【高分句型一】We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat every day．We can't eat too much or too little．We should keep the balance．（平衡飲食）Second，we should exercise often to build us up．Try to exercise for half an hour，you can do it twice or three times every week．Doing exercise can help make us strong．（參加運(yùn)動，強(qiáng)身健體）Third，Staying up at night is bad for our health．If we can't get enough sleep，we may have a headache．（早睡早起，不熬夜）Fourth，try to be happy，because happiness is important for our health，it's the best medicine．（保持好心情，笑對生活）Finally，we must go to see a doctor when we get ill．      If we try our best，we will be very healthy．【高分句型二】

點(diǎn)評 在寫作中要注意層次緊湊，開始有總說，最后一段總結(jié)，中間分要點(diǎn)分別說明題中給出的要點(diǎn)．用first，second，third，at last顯得層次鮮明，邏輯性很強(qiáng)．因?yàn)槲恼率翘岢鼋ㄗh，所以我們要用許多委婉的表達(dá)來給別人提出建議，如should，You'd better等．注意不要出現(xiàn)語法，詞匯等的錯誤，不要出現(xiàn)漢語式的英語．