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7．近期各種選秀節(jié)目愈發(fā)火熱，有些中學(xué)生也加入了選秀的行列．英語(yǔ)課上，Mr．Zhang讓你們對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行討論．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，并在課堂上發(fā)表演說(shuō)．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．有的人覺(jué)得選秀可以讓人一夜成名，讓人擁有不一樣的經(jīng)歷，讓人變得自信．
2．有的人則認(rèn)為選秀純粹是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，甚至還可能招致嘲笑．
3．你是怎么認(rèn)為的呢？
作文要求：
1．語(yǔ)句連貫，80詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名．
Hi，everyone!I would like to say something about the talent shows that are popular on TV these days．
Some students think the shows can make them famous．They think young people should do something different．If they have the chance to show their abilities to others，they can be more confident．They think it's very important for young people to show their abilities．Others think it's a waste of time and it's very hard for them to become successful．If they don't do well in the show，they will be laughed at．As a student，I think we should study hard and spend more time on our study．
Thanks for listening．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是針對(duì)選秀節(jié)目進(jìn)行了一次討論，要求寫一篇發(fā)言稿，匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果并發(fā)表自己的看法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．有的人覺(jué)得選秀可以讓人一夜成名，讓人擁有不一樣的經(jīng)歷，讓人變得自信．
2．有的人則認(rèn)為選秀純粹是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，甚至還可能招致嘲笑．
3．你是怎么認(rèn)為的呢？
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
make sb+adj 讓某人怎么樣
a waste of 浪費(fèi)
do well in 擅長(zhǎng)…
laugh at 嘲笑
study hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)
【高分句型】
1．They think ①②it's very important for young people to show their abilities．
①think后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
2．①If they don't ②do well in the show，they③will be laughed at．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②do well in 擅長(zhǎng)…
③一般將來(lái)時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài) will+be+過(guò)去分詞．laugh at 嘲笑

解答 Hi，everyone!I would like to say something about the talent shows that are popular on TV these days．
Some students think the shows can make them famous．（有的人覺(jué)得選秀可以讓人一夜成名）They think young people should do something different．If they have the chance to show their abilities to others，they can be more confident．They think it's very important for young people to show their abilities．．（讓人擁有不一樣的經(jīng)歷，讓人變得自信）【高分句型】Others think it's a waste of time and it's very hard for them to become successful．（有的人則認(rèn)為選秀純粹是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間）If they don't do well in the show，they will be laughed at．【高分句型】（甚至還可能招致嘲笑）As a student，I think we should study hard and spend more time on our study．（我的看法）
Thanks for listening．

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