Question

【題目】作文（10分）

假如你叫李平，你的筆友Scot不久將來到你的家鄉(xiāng)訪問。他希望你能提前告知一些你家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的情況。請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一封英文信。簡要描述你的家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)況。

位置：贛江邊；

面積：40萬平方公里；

人口：30萬；

交通建設：修建多座立交橋，拓寬了主要街道；

環(huán)境保護：遷移改造產(chǎn)生污染的工廠，凈化了水源；

人才引進：廣納各類專家，技術人員；

相關詞匯：交通：transportation，立交橋：traffic bridge，改造：transform

信的開頭已經(jīng)給出。

Dear Scot,

I'm very glad to know form your letter that you'll pay a visit to my hometown. And I'm too glad to tell you that my hometown has taken a new look!

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Look forward to seeing you soon!

Yours

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Scot,

I'm very glad to know form your letter that you'll pay a visit to my hometown. And I'm too glad to tell you that my hometown has taken a new look!

It lies on the Ganjiang River, covering an area of 40 square kilometers with a population of about 300,000.

The government pays special attention to its transportation. Some traffic bridges have been built； and the main streets have also been widened. To protect nature, the government has managed to transform or move the factories far away which polluted the air and water much. Also, many other measures are being taken to prevent pollution. To meet the need of the development, all kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.

I believe the people in my hometown will have a better life and will surely be richer and happier.

Look forward to seeing you soon!

Yours

Li Ping

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文主要講述了作者李平的筆友將來他們家鄉(xiāng)參觀，希望提前了解他們家鄉(xiāng)的變化。考生在寫作時要注意論點清晰及條理清楚。題目已給定大致的觀點，要注意漢譯英的正確性以及不要遺漏觀點，特別注意不要逐條翻譯。

寫作亮點：本篇短文作者從家鄉(xiāng)的位置，面積，人口，交通，環(huán)境等方面介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的情況。本篇文章句式的靈活多變。用到一些好的語句如：I'm too glad to tell you that my hometown has taken a new look!

any other measures are being taken to prevent pollution給文章增色不少。