Question

今天的火星是地球的前車之鑒，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
絕大多數(shù)科學(xué)家相信在火星上條件非常艱巨，沒有生命;
但也有些科學(xué)家證明火星上曾經(jīng)有過水和生命；
地球正在變得越來越來擁擠，污染越來越嚴(yán)重；
如此下去，地球?qū)⒉贿m合人類居住了；
我們應(yīng)該……（保護(hù)地球的做法）
注意：
1、短文要連貫通順，語法正確，不要逐字翻譯；
2、第5點(diǎn)用一、兩句話展開合理的想象；
3、詞數(shù)80左右。
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Answer 1

Most scientists believe that the conditions on Mars are very tough and there’s non life on it. But some scientists have proved that there was once water and life on Mars. Now the earth is becoming more and more crowded. The pollution is getting worse and worse. If this continue, the earth will not be suitable for humans to live. We should do something to prevent the earth becoming a second Mars. We can plant more trees and flowers to protect our environment.

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文要使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)現(xiàn)實(shí)、一把把將來時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)等時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱。在提出建議時(shí)可以使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文多次使用主從復(fù)合句，為文章增色不少。如：But some scientists have proved that there was once water and life on Mars. Now the earth is becoming more and more crowded.還用了一些連詞如if，but等。