Question

假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，給你的英國(guó)筆友Michael寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你們的校園活動(dòng)，并說(shuō)說(shuō)你對(duì)校園活動(dòng)的看法。
注意：
（1）內(nèi)容應(yīng)至少包含兩項(xiàng)校園活動(dòng)，要求意思、語(yǔ)句連貫；
（2）詞數(shù)80—100，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（3）注意書(shū)信格式，信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。

Answer 1

June 13th, 2011
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to tell you something about our colorful school life.
We usually have our activities from 4:30 to 6:00 in the afternoon. We have different kinds of activities. Some of us are interested in sports. They play football and basketball. Every term there is a basketball match between students and teachers in our school. We also have some clubs, such as drawing club, dancing club and singing club. But computer is the most popular in our school now. We have a computer room in our school. There’re more than 100 computers in it. Every afternoon, some students go and play computer games. On Thursday afternoon we go to English corner. We like talking in English there. We like English corner very much. Because we practice lots of oral English there.
We hope we can spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.
Yours
Li Ming

解析試題分析：這是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，且是給你的英國(guó)筆友Michael寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你們的校園活動(dòng)，并說(shuō)說(shuō)你對(duì)校園活動(dòng)的看法，所以要用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的書(shū)信。一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�，需要注意至少包含兩�?xiàng)校園活動(dòng)，要求意思、語(yǔ)句連貫，需要注意緊扣文章主題。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意詞數(shù)80—100，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；注意書(shū)信格式，信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。
考點(diǎn)：書(shū)信類(lèi)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。