Question

造紙術(shù)不僅是中國古代的偉大發(fā)明，同時也促進了世界文明的發(fā)展。請根據(jù)下面表格里所提示的內(nèi)容，以O(shè)ne of the Most Helpful Inventions為題寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)60-80之間。

Invention	Paper
Time	Western Han dynasty
Inventor	Cai Lun
Materials	bark, ropes, rags and so on
Uses	writing, painting, printing books and so on

One of the Most Helpful Inventions
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Answer 1

One of the Most Helpful Inventions
As we all know, paper is one of the four most important inventions in ancient China. It was invented in the Western Han dynasty by Cai Lun. After he had done many experiments. Cai Lun made paper with bark, ropes, rags and so on. It is a great contribution to the world.
Nowadays, paper is very useful in our work, study and daily life. We can use it to write, paint, print books and so on.
Thanks for the invention of paper. It has made our life more colorful.

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所給的題目結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇介紹造紙業(yè)的發(fā)展及對社會的重大貢獻，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達出來。寫作中要包含發(fā)明項、發(fā)明時間、發(fā)明者及原材料和用途等幾個方面進行陳述，表達出恰當(dāng)?shù)挠^點等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要是第三人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文簡明、扼要地闡明了造紙技術(shù)對于社會的貢獻及其發(fā)展，并包含了表格中所要求的基本信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含定語從句及被動語態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如As we all know，It was invented in the Western Han dynasty by Cai Lun，a great contribution to，made our life more colorful，and so on.學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。