Question

現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多父母希望將自己的孩子送到國(guó)外讀書(shū)，學(xué)好英語(yǔ)是十分必要的，如何提高英語(yǔ)水平？如何使自己將來(lái)能盡快融入到國(guó)外的學(xué)習(xí)生活？請(qǐng)給出以下建議：
加強(qiáng)聽(tīng)說(shuō)讀寫(xiě)訓(xùn)練。
多了解國(guó)外文化風(fēng)俗。
3．與外國(guó)朋友交筆友。
4. 除了學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，還要培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立自主能力。
5. 請(qǐng)另外給出幾條自己的想法和建議。
注意：① 詞數(shù)：80詞左右；
② 短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
③ 提示詞匯：
culture文化    abroad到國(guó)外    independent 獨(dú)立的
Now more and more parents want to send their children to study abroad.
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Answer 1

Now more and more parents want to send their children to study abroad. It is very important to learn English well。 So， how should we improve our English? How to make oneself in the future as soon as possible into the life of studying abroad? Aiming at this problem, I have a few suggestions: 1. to strengthen the training of listening, speaking, reading and writing. 2. know more about foreign cultures. 3. pen friend with foreign friends. 4. in addition to learn English well, but also cultivate their independent ability. 5. can ask a teacher to help learning. 6. can watch more English movies, use English to communicate with people and so on.

試題分析：本文要求就如何提高英語(yǔ)水平？如何使自己將來(lái)能盡快融入到國(guó)外的學(xué)習(xí)生活？給出一些建議。題目給出的要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意使用正確的語(yǔ)言，做到段落分明，條理清晰，符合邏輯。也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但一定要表達(dá)合理，符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文語(yǔ)句簡(jiǎn)煉，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰，寫(xiě)出了每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式如：It is very important to learn English well；How to make oneself in the future as soon as possible into the life of studying abroad?及use English to communicate with people and so on等。