Question

4．初中三年，你一定結(jié)識(shí)了許多同窗好友，他們中有的安靜沉穩(wěn)，有的活潑開(kāi)朗，有的品學(xué)兼優(yōu)，請(qǐng)你挑選一位你印象最深刻的好朋友，以"The friend who has impressed me most"為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，并涵蓋以下三個(gè)問(wèn)題：
1．What is he/she like？
2．Why has he/she impressed you most？（Give one or two examples）
3．What do you want to say to him/her before graduating from junior high？
注意：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
2．語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3．詞數(shù)80詞左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
The friend who has impressed me most
The friend who has impressed me most is                        ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I(mǎi) hope your dream will come true soon．我希望你的夢(mèng)想很快實(shí)現(xiàn)．句子中hope后面跟的是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，所使用的時(shí)態(tài)是一般將來(lái)時(shí)．
②The friend who has impressed me most is Wang Gang．給我印象最深的朋友是王剛．句子中who引導(dǎo)一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞friend，這里friend指的是人，用who引導(dǎo)．

解答 The friend who has impressed me most
The friend who has impressed me most is Wang Gang．（高分句型）（引出話題）He is tall and strong．（他的長(zhǎng)相）He is so humorous that I never feel bored when he is with me．He is also helpful and helps me a lot．We often have a good time together．（為什么我對(duì)他印象深刻）
    One Sunday last year，we went to climb Zijin Mountain together．I was so careless that I fell over on the way to the mountain．Wang Gang helped me all the way and finally sent me to the hospital．I was very grateful to him．（通過(guò)例子說(shuō)明他為什么給我印象這么深刻）
    We will graduate from junior high soon．I want to say，Wang Gang，you are my best friend．I will remember you forever．I hope your dream will come true soon．（高分句型）"（臨別寄語(yǔ)）

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