Question

17．I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School
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1）語(yǔ)言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；
2）文中不得使用其真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；
3）請(qǐng)將短文寫在答題卡上．寫在本試題卷上無效．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Fortunately，my friends showed me that education is important for my future，and I began to work harder at school．
這句話的句意為：幸運(yùn)的是，我的朋友向我證明了教育對(duì)我的將來很重要，然后我開始在學(xué)校更努力地學(xué)習(xí)了．"education is important for my future"為賓語(yǔ)從句，做"show"的賓語(yǔ)．
高分句型二：
I used to be a bit shy，but my friends and teachers have helped me to be more confident．
這句話句意為：我過去經(jīng)常害羞，但是我的朋友幫助我變得更加自信．其中"used　to　do　sth"意為"過去常常做某事"，"help　sb　（to）　do　sth"意為"幫助某人做某事"．

解答 I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School
My time at junior high school has been mostly good．（開篇點(diǎn)題）I've been at junior high school since 2004．In the first year，I made some good friends，and had a lot of fun．However，I didn't do so well at school in Grades 6 and 7．I didn't study hard enough．Fortunately，my friends showed me that education is important for my future，and I began to work harder at school．【高分句型一】I used to be a bit shy，but my friends and teachers have helped me to be more confident．【高分句型二】Now I know that I have the ability to do good work．My reports in Grade 8 were much better than in Grades 6 and 7．I'm very happy that I'm no longer bottom of the class．Since Grade 8，I think I have become more confident．I have learned a lot at junior high school．（成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷）
I have worked hard and I have enjoyed these last four years．I hope to do well in the final exam．I want to make my parents and teachers proud of me．（總結(jié)全文）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此作文要求考生根據(jù)初中三年的生活寫一篇記敘文．題目為：I Have Learned a Lot in Junior High School．因?yàn)槭菍懽约旱氖斋@，所以人稱用第一人稱．根據(jù)自己的生活經(jīng)歷，找出自己在學(xué)習(xí)、生活、文體活動(dòng)、與人相處等方面的進(jìn)步，寫出本文．