Question

11．根據(jù)下列提示信息，用英語寫一篇不少于80字的日記．
提示：1．著名教授Mr．Bobert今天（6月5日，星期五，晴）上午來你校做了一場報告．
2．其報告內(nèi)容包括：
•如何與同學(xué)友好相處；
•如何與家長老師有效溝通；
•如何控制不了情緒．
3．這場報告對今后的學(xué)習(xí)和生活都很重要．
要求1．日記中必須包含提示中的所有要點．
2．不要逐句翻譯可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3．必須用第一人稱寫作．
4．條理清晰，書寫規(guī)范．
5．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名等相關(guān)信息．
6．日記的開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不記不計入總詞數(shù)．

參考詞匯：有效的effectively．教授professor．
Friday，June 5th                                               Sunny
Friday，June5thSunny
This morning Mr．Robert，a famous professor，came to our school to give us a useful report．Mr．Robert told us how we could get along well with our classmates．He said that honesty is the best way．He also taught us how to communicate with our parents and teachers．When he talked about how we can control ourselves，he said，"Count to ten when you get angry．"
　　I learned an important lesson from Mr．Robert．Im sure his report will help us study better and live a happier life in future．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
It is easy to get on well with others．與別人相處很容易．這是it is+形容詞+for sb．to do
sth．句型，對于…來說…是有用的．
高分句型二
I'm sure his report will help us study better and live a happier life in the future．我相信他的報告會幫助我們更好地學(xué)習(xí)，過上更幸福的生活．I'm sure 后是賓語從句，help sb．do sth．幫助某人做某事．

解答 This morning Mr．Robert，a famous professor，came to our school to give us a useful report．【開篇點名主題】Mr．Robert told us how we could get along well with our classmates．It is easy to get on well with others．【高分句型一，注意it is+形容詞+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】．He said that honesty is the best way．He also taught us how to communicate with our parents and teachers．When he talked about how we can control ourselves，he said，"Count to ten when you get angry．"【報告大致內(nèi)容】I learned an important lesson from Mr．Robert．I'm sure his report will help us study better and live a happier life in the future【高分句型二，注意賓語句型的使用】．【感受】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯
關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．