Question

5．假設(shè)你是Mary，根據(jù)下面中文提示寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文?介紹自己的學(xué)校、班級(jí)和學(xué)習(xí)情況． 內(nèi)容包括?（1）在育才中學(xué)（Yucai Middle School）學(xué)習(xí)?，兩幢教學(xué)樓（classroom building）兩個(gè)大操場(chǎng)教室很大?
（2）班上有二十八個(gè)男生和二十個(gè)女生?
（3）所學(xué)科目  最喜歡的課程及原因?
（4）喜歡參加的體育活動(dòng)及個(gè)人愛好．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 There are two classroom buildings and two big playgrounds in my school．我的學(xué)校有兩個(gè)教學(xué)樓和兩個(gè)大操場(chǎng)．這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
I  think it"s good for my health． 我認(rèn)為這對(duì)我的健康有好處．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I hope是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 My name is Mary．I"m a student in YucaiMiddle School．There are two classroom buildings and two big playgrounds in my school【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】．Our classroom is very big．【要點(diǎn)一，學(xué)校情況】We have twenty-eight boys and twenty girls in our class．【要點(diǎn)二，班級(jí)情況】
   I have many subjects，such as Chinese，math，English，music，art and so on．I like English very much，because its very interesting and useful．【要點(diǎn)三，學(xué)習(xí)科目】I often have sports with my classmates after class．My favorite sport is football．I think it"s good for my health【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)四，喜歡參加的體育活動(dòng)及個(gè)人愛好】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．