Question

請(qǐng)以“My community centre”為題，介紹你家所在的社區(qū)的一些情況。要點(diǎn)提示：
1.我住在人民路城市花園小區(qū)。小區(qū)周圍有超市、飯館、一所學(xué)校和一所醫(yī)院等。2.這里的鄰居很友好和樂(lè)于助人。其中一些是志愿者，他們經(jīng)常在社區(qū)中心集中并分享各種不同的技能，他們能幫助人們解決各種問(wèn)題。3.在周末，他們會(huì)召開(kāi)援助會(huì)議，然后幫助人們檢查電腦、修理自行車。有時(shí)也去看望老年人，幫助他們打掃房間或購(gòu)物。4.談?wù)勀銓?duì)住在這個(gè)社區(qū)中心的感想。
                                                                          
                                                                           
                                                                            
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                            
                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible version:
I live in a neighbourhood in City Garden in Remain Road. Around it there are supermarkets, restaurants, a school and a hospital. The neighbours here are very kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They often meet at the community center and share their different skills. They can help people with all kinds of problems. At the weekend they usually have a “helping hands” meeting. Then they help people check their computers or fix their bicycles. Sometimes they also visit old people and help them do some shopping or clean their flats. I think we’re lucky to live in a neighbourhood like this.

試題分析：寫(xiě)作要抓住要點(diǎn)。初一的作文著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在“準(zhǔn)”字上下功夫。在寫(xiě)作中注意人稱與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫(xiě)的好的句子要進(jìn)行默寫(xiě)，這樣在寫(xiě)作時(shí)就能寫(xiě)出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文的寫(xiě)作首先社區(qū)中心的人們的一些活動(dòng)進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)。然后，用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)義工們有時(shí)去看望老人（visit the old），幫助他們打掃房間(clean the rooms)或是購(gòu)物(go shopping)，有時(shí)陪老人們聊天(chat with them)等活動(dòng)。最后，表達(dá)自己對(duì)社區(qū)中心的評(píng)價(jià)或感想。I think we’re lucky to live in a neighbourhood like this.