Question

“丹東是我家，文明靠大家!”作為中學生，我們應積極參與創(chuàng)建文明城市的建設 ，盡我們所能去做點事情。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
提示： 1. 不得透露考生真實姓名、地點、學校名稱
2. 這些詞匯或許對你有幫助：respect(尊敬)，be polite to,traffic rules,in trouble,
protect(保護),the zebra crossing(斑馬線)，step on the grass,red light,litter.......
3. 語句通順，意思連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。
Dandong is now making its effort to become a civilized( 文明的) city .As a student

Answer 1

Dandong is now making its effort to become a civilized( 文明的) city .As a student  As students, what should we do?
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red.
What's more, we should protect our environment. For example, We mustn't step on the grass and climb trees.
Litter mustn't be thrown everywhere.
Dandong is our hometown. Let's try our best to make it a civilized city.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心是以“丹東是我家，文明靠大家!”為主題的。作者介紹了作為中學生，我們應積極參與創(chuàng)建文明城市的建設 ，盡我們所能去做點事情。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，作者從我們中學生要為我們的城市做些什么為中心；用到了形態(tài)動詞we must do我們必須做什么，和 we should do我們應該做什么，Litter mustn't be thrown everywhere這些句子給文章增色不少。