Question

提示：現(xiàn)在電腦被廣泛使用，因特網(wǎng)越來越受歡迎。但學生和老師及父母之間對此看法不一樣。請根據(jù)以下要點，寫一篇短文，并表達自己的觀點。

學生的觀點	可以上網(wǎng)聊天，交朋友和購物； 可以打游戲，聽音樂使自己放松； 可以學到很多知識。
老師家長的觀點	網(wǎng)上交友不安全； 浪費時間，影響學習。
我的觀點	很有用，可以查資料、畫畫、收發(fā)郵件、看電影等。 不要沉迷于游戲和聊天而影響學習。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)70左右；短文開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 短文必須包含所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使其連貫、通順。

Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Today, computers are widely used and the Internet is becoming more and more popular. Many students like chatting and playing computer games online. They think chatting and playing computer games online can make them feel relaxed after school. They can also make a lot of friends and learn a lot of knowledge. However, most teachers and their parents don’t think it is safe to make friends online. Besides, it is a waste of time to chat online and play computer games. They are bad for their studies.
　　I think it’s useful to use computer ,we can look up information on line,we can draw and send and receive e-mail and see the film,but do not indulge in the game and chat affect learning.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇根據(jù)漢語和英語提示寫一篇因特網(wǎng)越來越受歡迎。但學生和老師及父母之間對此看法不一樣,文中根據(jù)三方面的建議學生，老師和家長，還有作者自己的觀點，使用了becoming more and more popular，They think chatting and playing computer games online can make them feel relaxed after school.注意一些固定搭配和詞組，考查了學生的綜合能力。

【亮點說明】這篇文章構(gòu)思新穎，內(nèi)容包括面很全，語言組織力很強，切中題意，文中出現(xiàn)了一些好的句型如：their parents don’t think it is safe to make friends online. Besides, it is a waste of time to chat online and play computer games. They are bad for their studies.使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理和說服力。

考點：給材料作文。