Question

現(xiàn)今，城市交通繁重，每年都有許多交通事故發(fā)生。作為中學生，我們應當如何保持安全？你有什么好的建議嗎？要求：內容貼切，句意通順，單詞拼寫正確，書寫工整。60個詞左右。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Now the traffic is very heavy in the cities. Every year a lot of accidents happen and many people get injured or die in traffic accidents. So it is important for us to keep the traffic rules.

When we cross the street, we should take the crosswalk. If we are riding a bike, keep riding on the right side of the road. When the red light is on, please stop and wait until the green light is on. Give a hand signal if we want to turn or stop. Playing on the road is very dangerous. So don’t do that. Helping the old and children cross the road is always a kind thing. If we obey the traffic rules, it will be much safer for us.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們就“應當如何保持安全” 寫一篇短文。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的主要內容：作為中學生，我們應當如何保持安全？你有什么好的建議嗎？這些內容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者首先說明城市交通現(xiàn)狀，然后對怎樣保證安全談到自己的建議，層次清晰表達到位。短文中需要作者自己補充的內容完成得也不錯。如So it is important for us to keep the traffic rules.等。這些內容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如Playing on the road is very dangerous. So don’t do that.等。

考點：話題類作文。