Question

12．有些學生既不回家吃午飯也不樂意在學校飯?zhí)贸晕绮�，常到校外的餐廳去吃他們所喜歡的食品，甚至常吃校門外一些小攤上售賣的食物．有些食物是不衛(wèi)生、不健康的．請你就這一現(xiàn)象展開討論，談談你的看法和建議．
要求：1.80個詞以上；2．條理清晰，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確；
3．文中不得使用真實的校名及姓名．
參考詞匯：go…for lunch，canteen，stall，delicious，unhealthy，opinion．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
they prefer to go out of school to buy something they like to eat 他們寧愿走出學校去買他們喜歡吃的東西，they like to eat 是定語從句，修飾先行詞   something．  
高分句型二
 In my opinion，if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside，they should make the food more delicious在我看來，如果我們的學校希望更多的學生回來在學校吃午飯，他們應該使食物更美味．這是if引導的條件狀語從句，如果…．

解答 Some students don't like to go home for lunch，they dislike eating lunch at school．They prefer to go out of school to buy something they like to eat【高分句型一，注意定語從句的使用】．Some of them even eat the food from some stalls outside the school gates．But I'm afraid the food is not clean，it's unhealthy for students to eat outside．【要點一，學生到校外吃東西的情況】
       In my opinion，if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside，they should make the food more delicious【高分句型二，注意if引導的條件狀語從句的使用】，and  they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well．【要點二，自己的觀點及建議】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．