Question

【題目】廣州某電臺(tái)英文頻道將開(kāi)設(shè) Welcome to Guang zhou欄目,目前面向全市中學(xué)生征集“微 州”英文介紹。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,向欄目投稿。短文需包括下圖所有提示內(nèi)容。

注意:1.詞數(shù):80詞左右(短文的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù));

2. 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分。

Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Guangzhou is waiting for you.

Answer 1

【答案】Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. Located in the south of China，Guangzhou, with a history of more than two thousand years, plays a significant role in both economy and culture of China.With moderate as well as comfortable climate, Guangzhou is famous as a flower city for its distinctive food.

I strongly recommend Canton Tower-a badly well-known scenic spot. First of all, Canton Tower is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can't help being fascinated by it. In addition, when you arrive at the top of Canton Tower, you have such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. Last but not least, you can take a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.

As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that Guangzhou is good choice for you to visit. I am sure that you will enjoy yourself while making a visit in Guangzhou.

Guangzhou is waiting for you.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們用英語(yǔ)介紹廣州這座城市。題目中用圖示展示了短文中應(yīng)包括的內(nèi)容：廣州市的位置、歷史、特色、氣候特點(diǎn)以及廣州的一個(gè)好去處，并闡述理由。學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些提示進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，為時(shí)內(nèi)容豐富、充實(shí)，應(yīng)對(duì)每個(gè)話題進(jìn)行拓展，詳細(xì)地對(duì)廣州進(jìn)行介紹。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱和第三人稱為主來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先短文中應(yīng)包括題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。各個(gè)內(nèi)容應(yīng)敘述清楚、內(nèi)容具體。同時(shí)注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，要分清主次，合理安排各個(gè)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。