Question

為了全體學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校每年都要組織一次“消防安全演練”，如果發(fā)生到火災(zāi)時(shí)，我們正好在室內(nèi)，這時(shí)我們應(yīng)該采取一些什么樣的自救措施呢？哪些方法我們又不應(yīng)采用呢，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示發(fā)揮想象以How to Protect us from fire為題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（7分）
提示詞：keep calm, call 119, turn off the gas and lights cover face, and leave the building, take the lift jump off
If a fire happens suddenly when we are in the room. We must do the following things: ______
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Answer 1

How to Protect us from fire
If a fire happens suddenly when we are in the room, we must do the following things:
Firstly, we should keep calm. It is very important to keep calm. We can’t shout loudly and run in panic. Secondly, we must call 119 immediately. It’s very dangerous to put out the fire by ourselves. Then, we can turn off the gas and lights. It is helpful to prevent the fire being more serious. On the way to leave the room, we can use wet clothes or towels to cover faces, because they can stop the smoke entering into our noses and mouths. And there is one thing more we must remember. We mustn’t use the elevator to leave the building, because the fire may cause something wrong with the elevator.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。題中給出了問(wèn)題主題和一些提示詞。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，可審清題意，組織好文章結(jié)構(gòu)。例如可使用firstly, secondly等詞語(yǔ)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰。另外，一些連詞的使用也可以加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，文中用到的Firstly首先；Secondly第二；Then接著等詞語(yǔ)，使結(jié)構(gòu)非常清晰。另外用到了很多有用的表達(dá)方式，例如句型it is+形容詞+ to do sth.; It is very important to keep calm.保持冷靜是很重要的；It’s very dangerous to put out the fire by ourselves.我們自己去撲火是很危險(xiǎn)的；It is helpful to prevent the fire being more serious.這對(duì)阻止火勢(shì)的蔓延是有幫助的。