Question

18．作為一名學(xué)生，你發(fā)現(xiàn)有許多同學(xué)在學(xué)校就餐時(shí)存在不同程度的浪費(fèi)食物的現(xiàn)象，對(duì)此請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，以Don't waste any more為標(biāo)題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，呼吁大家節(jié)約糧食，防止浪費(fèi)．
1．Food is important to us…
2．Many students waste much food．For example…
3．Lots of people are short of food in the world，die of hunger．
4．We should have a good habit．
參考詞匯：leave…on the plate（留…在盤(pán)里）；pour…into（倒進(jìn)…）；rubbish can（垃圾桶）
要求：①70詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；
②語(yǔ)言流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔；
③文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名．
Don't waste any more
Food is very important to us．                                           
Let's take an active part together!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：In order to make China dream come true，we should save everything as well as the food in our life．為了實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)的夢(mèng)想，我們要節(jié)約一切以及我們生活中的食物．In order to為了，as well as 也，以及．
高分句型二：What's more，lots of people are short of food in the world．更重要的是，世界上許多人缺乏食物．What's more，更重要的是，be short of短缺．

解答 Food is important to us．It's everyone's duty to save food．But at school not everyone can realize this【要點(diǎn)一，食物的重要性】．Many students waste much food．For example，some students buy more food than they need．They leave much on the plate and then pour it into the rubbish can．Some students even throw the food everywhere for fun【要點(diǎn)二，列舉浪費(fèi)食物的現(xiàn)象】．Our country is a developing county．In order to make China dream come true，we should save everything as well as the food in our life【高分句型一，注意固定詞組的使用】．What's more，lots of people are short of food in the world【高分句型二，注意注意固定詞組的使用】．They live a hard life and many of them，especially some children，die of hunger【要點(diǎn)三，世界糧食現(xiàn)狀】．We should have a good habit．Let's take an action part together!【要點(diǎn)四，呼吁要采取行動(dòng)，節(jié)約糧食】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類(lèi)題材，將詞匯歸類(lèi)整理；動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．