Question

【題目】從下面兩個(gè)題目中任選一題，根據(jù)中英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。

題目①

假如你叫李華，你們班打算在教師節(jié)那天舉辦慶�；顒�(dòng)，你打算邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)校的美國(guó)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一封電子郵件，告訴他活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容以及需要做什么準(zhǔn)備。

注意：

1字?jǐn)?shù)不少于50詞；

2郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，所給單詞不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3請(qǐng)不要寫出你的真實(shí)姓名和校名。

提示詞語(yǔ)：2:00, afternoon, September 10th, classroom, flowers, say thanks, cards

Dear Peter,

How is it going?

I’m writing to invite you to come to our celebration on Teachers’ Day. _______________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

題目②

在人的一生中，閱讀是一個(gè)非常重要的習(xí)慣。除了教材，中學(xué)生應(yīng)該積極開展課外閱讀（after-class reading）……

現(xiàn)在，某英文報(bào)紙就（My After-class Reading）話題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿。請(qǐng)描述你在課后通常的閱讀內(nèi)容和方式，你課外閱讀后的感受，以及你對(duì)于課外閱讀的看法。

注意：

1字?jǐn)?shù)不少于50詞；

2所給提示語(yǔ)供選用；

3請(qǐng)不要寫出你的真實(shí)姓名和校名。

提示詞語(yǔ)：many kinds of, novels, magazines, Internet, skills , necessary,

● What do you usually do about after-class reading?

● How do you feel after you do it?

● What do you think of after-class reading?

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

題目①

Dear Peter,

How is it going?

I’m writing to invite you to come to our celebration on Teachers’ Day. It will start in our classroom at 2 o’clock on September 10th. We celebrate it every year to show our respect and love to our teachers, at the same time to say thank you to them for their hard work. This time we are going to sing some songs and dance for our teachers. We have also prepared flowers and cards.

Don’t forget to bring your camera with you. I am sure you want to take some nice photos to remember the wonderful moment. We would love it if you can come and join us.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

題目②

Reading is an important part of life. I usually do some reading after I finish my homework every day. I read not only Chinese great novels but also many kinds of magazines and newspapers in English. Sometimes I even read on the Internet.

After reading I often feel very relaxed. Sometimes I get very excited about what I have read. Doing after-class reading also improves my reading skills which help with my study.

I think after-class reading is very necessary and useful since it can enlarge my vocabulary as well as open my mind. So everybody, please join me!

【解析】試題分析：題目①屬于書信類作文，也是材料作文。仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示：假如你叫李華，你們班打算在教師節(jié)那天舉辦慶�；顒�(dòng)，你打算邀請(qǐng)你們學(xué)校的美國(guó)交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一封電子郵件，告訴他活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容以及需要做什么準(zhǔn)備。題目②是提綱類作文，也是話題作文。仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示：請(qǐng)描述你在課后通常的閱讀內(nèi)容和方式，你課外閱讀后的感受，以及你對(duì)于課外閱讀的看法。注意： 1字?jǐn)?shù)不少于50詞；2郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，所給單詞不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3請(qǐng)不要寫出你的真實(shí)姓名和校名。仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，添加內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；題目①寫出了活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容以及需要做什么準(zhǔn)備，準(zhǔn)確了運(yùn)用了時(shí)態(tài)，條件從句、賓語(yǔ)從句和一些短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用增加了文采，例如，Don’t forget to，at the same time等。題目②寫出了課后通常的閱讀內(nèi)容和方式，課外閱讀后的感受，以及對(duì)于課外閱讀的看法，運(yùn)用了高分句型定語(yǔ)從句Doing after-class reading also improves my reading skills which help with my study.和賓語(yǔ)從句和時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句I think after-class reading is very necessary and useful since it can enlarge my vocabulary as well as open my mind.，固定短語(yǔ)not only…but also等。字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫。