Question

根據(jù)下面的提示以“Amazing animals”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)在80左右。

1.世界上最大的動(dòng)物不是大象，是藍(lán)鯨（blue whale）；

2.世界上最大的動(dòng)物在海洋里，但不是魚(yú)；

3.他們很久以前就生活在地球上；

3.它們通常有30米長(zhǎng)，重1 000千克。

4.它們是世界上最聰明的動(dòng)物之一，它們可以相互交談。當(dāng)然，我們是聽(tīng)不懂的。

Amazing animals

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Answer 1

Amazing animals

Elephants are not the biggest animals in the world. The world’s biggest animals are in the sea—but not fish. They lived on the earth a long time ago. They’re usually 30 metres long and 1,000 kilos heavy. They’re one of the cleverest animals in the world. They can talk to each other, but people don’t know what they are saying. What are they? They’re called blue whales.

【解析】

試題分析：這里敘述的世界上最大的動(dòng)物，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)問(wèn)題較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：The world’s biggest animals are in the sea—but not fish. They can talk to each other, but people don’t know what they are saying.等，短文還用了一些連詞如：but，what等，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜化，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。